We can see that you still have a lot to do and more footage to film but the footage you have is really effective. The parts where you have the girl in black and white with the balloons in colour reflects her emotions and fits in well with the narrative. The camerawork here is also very good. There are a good range of shots that vary throughout the footage to keep the viewers interest.
You need to add some lip syncing and possibly some more close up shots to show the girls emotion even more and make the video more personal.
We really like the ending of the video with the candles on the cake, the editing here is effective but there is room for improvement. We also think that you should use more footage that is lit just with candles as this gives a softer atmosphere to the video.
Well done so far :)
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