Commentary Feedback.

Overall the Commentary was good, everyone in the group had a chance to say something, although a couple of group members did have more say than other. I liked how you cut it different when you were answering a different question which broke it up abit, and did link it to your video, which probably could have been done a little more.

feedback

Has all that it should have on it.
Promotes artist well, as it has a picture of them on front and back.
The poster is not in black and white which doesn't run with the DVD, or the font is different colours.
The poster doesn't have band website or info like that.
The writing on the front looks a bit muddled.
Continuity good as they have both 2 people in all three things.

Feedback from T2-47.

• Genre Conventions: Indie Rock genre, clothing matched genre, there was a lead singer. Lip Sync was out at one point. Main story along side that cuts away to, although the story isn't too clear.
  
• Lyrics & Visuals: 17 Candles on the cake link to their lyrics.
  
• Music & visuals: No instruments but had someone to lip sync.
  
• Demands of the record labels: Main artist had lots of shots throughout along side the main story.
  
• Voyeurism: Yes, when they're partying with balloons, whens at the tree & when shes texting because you can see her texts.
  
• Intertextual reference: No real intertextual reference to any other music video, film or tv program.
  

it cool, need to fill the gaps in, fits with goodwin. though have not yet seen any lip syncing, fits the genre, good auteur theory, doesnt sell the artist, goes with blog, advanced editing done well, good job.