Pitch Feedback

Although our pitch went well there are certain areas which need improving. To enhance our pitch we will add information on: 

• duration of video
  
• shot types/ camera angles
• storyboard

Areas of our pitch which our class members liked:

• the black and white visuals to suite the mood of the main character (sad and unhappy) which then turn to a colour visual when she is happy - good signifier
• the slow motion idea, again to suite the mood of the main character
• the overall concept idea of the video especially the idea of linking the visuals to the music (having seventeen candles)